Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Inroduce my self

My name is Hzhar.I am from Iraq.I am 27 yers old.I have been here fore 5 month. At first when I came here I filt worry and Iwas rgret .But after that I was itertain with Malaysia .I want to study master in urban desing but my English language so bad because I come to BRITISH COUNCIL to perfect my english.
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1 comment:

  1. Hi Hazhar
    Nice to meet you today. I see one thing to improve is your spelling :-) check 'fore', filt' 'desing'
    Also I regretted it, not I was regret.
    Avoid using very short sentence when you can join with and or but. e.g. I am from Iraq and am 27 years old.
    Chris
    :-)

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