Thursday, June 9, 2011

Summary of Crime

Britain's Forensic Service has now produced shows the shoeprints of all most common shoes . The shoeprints are very important to the police . They show how many people were there and show where the criminals moved . So when the police study the shoeprints the can understand what happened during the crime. Also its tell the police what kind of shoes that the were wearing . All that will help the police solve crimes more quickly .







By Zaid Ghazi

2 comments:

  1. A nice summary. Just a few things to consider.

    I think it should read 'has now produced a databank of all the most common shoes. (line 1)
    Put a full stop before also (line 4)
    Also, you have used the instead of they twice. Is this a typing mistake?

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  2. Hi teacher .
    Sorry I don't understand what do you want in (Line 1)

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