Miralem usually gets to the class 7 o'clock.First he took break fast.Then he goes the his first class,this is at 9:30.After that he goes to KLCC before lunch.In the afternoon Miralem has one more class from 2 o'clock to 5. Finally, he leave the BC at 5:30 it's long day.
Hi Maria. Make sure you write your name on your writing so we know who has written it.
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at 7 o'clock
have breakfast
third person s 'he leaves'
Use a full stop between sentences or a linking word.
Finally, he leave the BC at 5:30. It's long day.
Use a space after a fullstop or a comma.